The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your game-of-life story. It seemed incredibly sad that the parents in your story missed out on so much in sharing your life.
09/18/08
Interesting roller-coaster story with strong emotive component.
09/21/08
I enjoyed this story. It reminded me just a little of the story behind the song "Cat's in the Cradle" where the parent doesn't have time for his child, because of commitments, then realizes it's too late to get to know him.

This was a good example of walking thru life, trying to reach out, but never able to make that connection.