The Official Writing Challenge
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You accomplished an introduction to an interesting man by dialog
about him and showed how the game of life extends from one generation to the next.
Your piece would showcase better if you would leave a space between paragraphs.
Great perspective on the game of life. Beautifully written.
This is a charming piece across the generations- detailing many of the man's characteristics- well done.