The Official Writing Challenge
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WOW! What a story! You had my attention fully! Write lots more, please!
Excellent message and presented with just the right touch of intrigue.
Very interesting take on the topic! Caught my attention right from the beginning.
A very creative piece. I love that you were true the nature of the Bible story but combined it with today. I agree that you could do this with many other Bible figures and parables.
This is really good. A wonderful visual on how Jesus wipes away all our sins. I enjoyed this immensely. Great job! Keep writing.
WOW. I have read 2 of your pieces and they are the best! What a gift you have. I agree, more please.
Excellent! I was sort-of getting the setting about half way through and wondered if I should continue - I'm glad I did. You did a superb job. God bless and keep writing.