The Official Writing Challenge
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WOW! What a story! You had my attention fully! Write lots more, please!
Excellent message and presented with just the right touch of intrigue.
09/12/08
Very interesting take on the topic! Caught my attention right from the beginning.
09/18/08
A very creative piece. I love that you were true the nature of the Bible story but combined it with today. I agree that you could do this with many other Bible figures and parables.
This is really good. A wonderful visual on how Jesus wipes away all our sins. I enjoyed this immensely. Great job! Keep writing.
11/03/08
WOW. I have read 2 of your pieces and they are the best! What a gift you have. I agree, more please.
11/12/08
Excellent! I was sort-of getting the setting about half way through and wondered if I should continue - I'm glad I did. You did a superb job. God bless and keep writing.