The Official Writing Challenge
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09/11/08
Powerful and more than just a bit like all of us, I'm afraid. We all put on our pretenses and hide our challenges...God knows us, though, and we know ourselves.
The second stanza speaks volumes, "And then I snapped." Great job with the topic.
This poem brought lots of images to mind, reflections of the poet's soul.
Well written peek into a sad mind. Great job with the topic.
09/20/08
GREAT work! Introspective and right on.