The Official Writing Challenge
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09/11/08
So Funny! Very creative descriptions for setting the scenes. I would have avoided the use of the word 'son' over and over again. (but maybe thats just me).
Clever title and how you worked it into ths story or perhaps the other way around.
What a cute story and great approach to topic.
09/13/08
Good storytelling. I agree it's a clever take on the topic.
09/14/08
You have portrayed little boys at play brilliantly. I can certainly identify with being so enveloped by giggles that discipline goes out of the window. Nicely done!
09/15/08
Wow, I never would have thought of this on the topic. Good job thinking outside the box!