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Poignant. You took me into her fears and loneliness. An excellent example of building to a snapping point.
I could really relate to this....but not the parents noticing and helping. Real feeling here.
This is very good. I felt her pain as she struggled with depression. I'm glad her parents noticed and got her help. Great take on the topic.
09/13/08
remembering to ask the simple how was you day and actually listen for the answer may be such a little thing, but necessary to head off the big things.