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Poignant. You took me into her fears and loneliness. An excellent example of building to a snapping point.
I could really relate to this....but not the parents noticing and helping. Real feeling here.
This is very good. I felt her pain as she struggled with depression. I'm glad her parents noticed and got her help. Great take on the topic.
remembering to ask the simple how was you day and actually listen for the answer may be such a little thing, but necessary to head off the big things.