The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a very interesting story with great takes in it.
These are the great victories, so often hidden from general knowledge, yet this is where the battles are fought - in the personal choices people make. So many issues arise from this one.
Lots of action going on here, good characterizations, but the plot left me with unanswered questions - but, that could just be me. :)
Good descriptions. Temptations, but overcome with right decisions. Well done.