The Official Writing Challenge
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Lots of detail to let the reader know the mass of activities that occurred over the twenty years. IMHO, this was light on showing the emotions of the characters as "devastating" things were shared. Realistic in details. :)
09/06/08
Good descriptions. Nicely done.
Wow, this was good. Liked this take on the topic.