The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/08
Well, he was an astute liar, wasn't he? Great last line.
09/05/08
Very creative and interesting. Thanks for sharing it. It was fun to read. If demons lie to us, why not each other?
09/05/08
My children enjoyed this piece a great deal, and it lead to alot of discussion, thanks for sharring.
09/05/08
The lisp was a bit distracting but overall good story.Since Jesus wasn't persuaded I think I would've said,"you will offer him food" or something to that effect. I think if I were the demon I wouldn't dare tell my boss I'd failed at such an important mission either. You really got me thinking.
09/06/08
Interesting take on the topic. Lies fail every time. Good job.
Creative way of approaching this difficult topic.
Nice variant view on the Bible passage of Jesus' temptation. I found it a little hard to keep track of the "speaker" when the same "demon" was talking, but the quotations were separated by new paragraphing. Good job with details of plot. :)
09/08/08
Such an interesting retelling of a familiar story. Good writing.