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Well, he was an astute liar, wasn't he? Great last line.
Very creative and interesting. Thanks for sharing it. It was fun to read. If demons lie to us, why not each other?
My children enjoyed this piece a great deal, and it lead to alot of discussion, thanks for sharring.
The lisp was a bit distracting but overall good story.Since Jesus wasn't persuaded I think I would've said,"you will offer him food" or something to that effect. I think if I were the demon I wouldn't dare tell my boss I'd failed at such an important mission either. You really got me thinking.
Interesting take on the topic. Lies fail every time. Good job.
Creative way of approaching this difficult topic.
Nice variant view on the Bible passage of Jesus' temptation. I found it a little hard to keep track of the "speaker" when the same "demon" was talking, but the quotations were separated by new paragraphing. Good job with details of plot. :)
Such an interesting retelling of a familiar story. Good writing.