The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/08
Very nice story. Sometimes these things turn out okay. Good job.
09/05/08
So let Carrie gloat--the MC got the date. Good for her! I love the line about kicking myself 53 times. Some of us have been there but haven't had a friend dare us over the mountain of shyness.
Great take on the topic. I like the line too, about kicking myself 53 times. Well done.
This was very well done. Loved it. Well written and a winner!
09/07/08
Your title drew me in, the familiar life-road kept me to the happy ending.
Like the way you drew the title from the story. Good job sharing your characters. Great piece for teens. :)
Congratulations- I liked the mix of hoping and worrying that he would be there. Wondered about using the word insane twice?
Your piece is very realistic and very well written. Makes me want to know how the dance turns out and what happens from there. Hope you write that. Congratulations!!