The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/08
Very nice story. Sometimes these things turn out okay. Good job.
09/05/08
So let Carrie gloat--the MC got the date. Good for her! I love the line about kicking myself 53 times. Some of us have been there but haven't had a friend dare us over the mountain of shyness.
09/05/08
Great take on the topic. I like the line too, about kicking myself 53 times. Well done.
09/06/08
This was very well done. Loved it. Well written and a winner!
09/07/08
Your title drew me in, the familiar life-road kept me to the happy ending.
09/07/08
Like the way you drew the title from the story. Good job sharing your characters. Great piece for teens. :)
09/11/08
Congratulations- I liked the mix of hoping and worrying that he would be there. Wondered about using the word insane twice?
09/27/08
Your piece is very realistic and very well written. Makes me want to know how the dance turns out and what happens from there. Hope you write that. Congratulations!!