The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/08
Good meter and content. Especially like images of "dregs of wine" and "crook of Shepherd's arm".
I really struggled with this topic. I love the way you approached it. Great poem.
09/04/08
I enjoyed this poem. Very well expressed. Also thanks for the chanllenge. God bless and keep writing for His glory...Randy Gene
09/04/08
Excellent! I like this. Good rhyming. Very nicely done.
I enjoyed everything about this poem. Keep up the good work.
This was easy to read. Flowed really well. Nice job!
Nicely written; message carried throughout. Good job. :)