The Official Writing Challenge
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The gnats have become elephants! and the elephants...well. It read like a prayer to me. Thanks!
08/28/08
My favorite line was "tripping over gnats and running into elephants". Humans can be so blind sometimes--it's a good thing God is so patient with us. Good job.
This piece reveals the personal emotions of the MC well. Nice job. :)
08/29/08
Awesome title, and well-done inspirational piece.
08/30/08
I really enjoyed the insights of this piece, and also the intimacy of the conversation.
08/30/08
I loved the title and how it fit this piece and even added to it.