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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Beach (07/04/05)

TITLE: Heavenly bliss
By Cynthia Harry
07/09/05


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The beach

I look at the beach and see God expressing himself in nature. It holds no discrimination to age, sex, race or creed just like the creator.
The creator works in mysterious ways and his work appears in the beach.
The sands on the shore are too numerous to count so is his love and grace.
The sand on the beach also shows how many times he will forgive us and how many times we should forgive others.
Can you count the sand? Those are the amount of days he will give human beings to save their souls. Until the very last one hears his Gospel, the sands on the beach shall not be counted.
I take a close look at the beach and asked ďare the sands of the shore becoming lessĒ? Yes the sands off time are running out. Wake up mankind your days are numbered. The sands on the beach are becoming less and less.
I look at the beach. I see the tide. Is that the struggle for our souls? In the dept of the ocean many objects are lost. They are tossed around by the waves, not sure of their direction. They have no control of themselves. The current and tide take the ones that are heading in the right direction and carry them to the shores of the beach. So does the love of the creator. His love carries the ones that are heading in the right direct to the shores off comfort and peace regardless of the turmoil around them. For the ones that have not yet found the tide of Godís love, it is there just like the tide of the beach. One step in the right direction and Godís love current will draw and guide you safely to the shores of his beach.
Lord you are my beach, just like the sand, your love cannot be counted, like the tide you are constantly drawing me to your heavenly shore, as the waves washes the shores you are washing me from impurities. How I wish the world would recognise that you are the creator and that your desire is that no one should perish but all will be safe on your beach.


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Deborah Bauers07/11/05
I like your metaphor of God being your beach. This is unique. Thanks for sharing.
Nina Phillips07/13/05
I truly liked your article, a very touching and interesting vision. Good writing.
God bless,
littlelight
Shari Armstrong 07/15/05
Very nice imagery and wonderful points.
Beth Muehlhausen07/15/05
Favorite line: "I see the tide. Is that the struggle for our souls?"
Maxx .07/17/05
very good! nice work.