The Official Writing Challenge
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I like your metaphor of God being your beach. This is unique. Thanks for sharing.
07/13/05
I truly liked your article, a very touching and interesting vision. Good writing.
God bless,
littlelight
07/15/05
Very nice imagery and wonderful points.
Favorite line: "I see the tide. Is that the struggle for our souls?"
07/17/05
very good! nice work.