The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the concise yet flowing style in which this lesson is conveyed. Nicely done.
As a fellow gardener of flowers and souls in kindnesses, I liked this. Watch the word "threw" -- you meant "through".
Nicely written reminder for us to be patient with His patience.
Nice devotional. The comparison with the African Violet was well thought. :)
Wonderful parable!

There were some words unnecessarily capitalized; on the other hand, "Bible" should always be capitalized.

Small nitpicks only--this is a very lovely entry.
HI: This is a well written story - good luck - of all the stories I read tonight this one is tops - thank you for sharing - Like your comparison -
As one with an african violet on my kitchen sill over my sink, I really enjoyed this. Great example.