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Nice, patient verse!
08/29/08
Good job tying together the Old and New Testaments in this poem.

Note: you meant "breath", not "breadth", and I think you could do without the extra exclamation points. You want your words to inspire your reader, not your punctuation.

I love poems that accomplish their goal in just a few stanzas, and this one was perfectly laid out.

08/29/08
Hi: Thank you I enjoyed your peom - good luck
08/31/08
I loved the focus of this poem.
09/02/08
I loved this poem! Especially the fifth stanza. There were many ways to go with the subject of patience, but patiently waiting for our Lord's promised return in the midst of all the mocking was the best! May we all profit from this very timely poem. It is so easy to get caught up in this world's merry-go-round and forget the late hour. Thanks!