The Official Writing Challenge
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08/29/08
Great title!

I was really drawn to this poor woman's trials, but at times I had trouble following the chronological order, and a few events seemed to have little to do with the rest of the story.

The last few paragraphs are quite nice.
08/31/08
What a beautiful moment! I love how the title tied in with the story.