The Official Writing Challenge
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I felt the heat, I smelled the ice cream, my lips curved in a smile every time Gramps winked!
08/29/08
Mmmmm, very good. I want some!
08/29/08
Me too!
loved the imagery.
After reading...the title makes sense!
I'm a bit jealous...never did get homemade ice cream!
08/31/08
Ooooooh! I really like this one! I loved the wink and smile routine and the missing ingredient. Good job!
I really enjoyed this. It was easy to visualise the interaction between grandfather and son.
I mean...and grandson :)
09/04/08
I've spent many an afternoon of childhood crankin out that frozen patience. Good job!
I love this story. It brought me back to a time when life was simpler. I, too, loved the smile and wink. And the fact that his grandson appreiciated it. Congratulations of placing third. Great job!