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08/29/08
Interesting "might have been" look at a Biblical times discussion.

It was manybe a bit dialogue-heavy...some more action and description might be in order. I lost track easily of the speakers. And I don't understand the title.

I like the somewhat archaic language of your speakers; it lent an air of authenticity.
I liked this a lot, although I too, did not get the drift of the title. Nice story.
08/31/08
I'm thinking maybe the title is a marriage of work? that they might agree to work together? Good story. It was a little hard to follow sometimes, but with a little effort I think I was able to get it.
09/01/08
I thought you did well bringing out Peter's scepticism of Paul. It's certainly got me thinking and wondering how things were for those men, and that of itself is very good.