The Official Writing Challenge
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07/11/05
This is HILARIOUS! requiring the second reading to be a dramatization to my husband! Superbly crafted, inspiring well-deserved laughs!
They say laughter is a very good medicine for one's soul - well this short-story blessed my soul and stomach muscles....I couldn't stop laughing it's so descriptive and so funny as well... a great combination in short-story writing!!!
Well done. I enjoyed the battle. A winner in my book..I love humor.
07/14/05
That was so funny! Just sooooo funny, and I think that would be a really great story for kids too. I am rolling!
I liked the ending too.
God bless ya, littlelight
07/15/05
A very creative and entertaining story!!!!!
You got me, right here: "Several shots of water squirted passed his vision...." Up until this point, I was waiting for a real war story! Cute, innovative story.