The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/08
This is a well written conversation.......just beautiful. Thank you.
08/29/08
Very nice lyrical form. Liked the 'desire', then, God's 'direction' given in each verse. Good summary verse with words from each previous verse included. :)
08/29/08
Very nice!
09/03/08
These examples added greatly to the overall meaning. Very nice.
09/07/08
This is excellent- I particularly liked the way you brought all the verse together in the final one; the diamond illustration is also a favourite of mine, depicted in my "Diamond in tha dark" poem.
09/07/08
Sorry- couldn't remember my favourite line without checking back - "making irritants beautiful- "inspired"
09/14/08
Linda, I love this poem again on a second reading, and I plan to feature it on the Front Page Showcase for the week of October 20. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page, and congratulations!
10/20/08
Beautiful. With insight. I just heard the Lord speak through someone at a retreat, about the irritation a pearl endures. It's been happening so much lately in my life, with a less than lovely response to it. So it was needed refreshing, relief, to hear it was given to me, a blessing. Then coming here and seeing this,immediately, was doubly wonderful, doubly confirming. Strengthening to go back and let the irritation do it's work.
Thank you. Kathy A.
10/22/08
Amen.Thank you.The Lord is using His children.I can also relate to all you share.
And His answers are always so beautiful.WOW! You are awesome Lord,thank you.
Amen.
10/24/08
Wow. This is lovely, with so much wisdom. God always knows what we need to grow in the Spirit and closer to Him. God Bless.
10/24/08
Hi - I just went through a horrible week - Wow! this psalm says it all - Giving off a wonderful aroma - not sure that happened I was very upset but crushed and bruised I was - Not sure I passed the test. - thank you for reminding me of what its all about not about me that's for sure. - congratuations on being featured - It never fails to amaze me how the Father can minister from anywhere when needed and to be reminded . Thank you.
10/26/08
What an encouragement!! And how truly this speaks to our intimate walk with the Lord!! Thank you so much:)