The Official Writing Challenge
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I love it! Yes! When the wife succeeded easily with the plastic wrap I busted out laughing! Well told story!
08/29/08
Cute story, perfect ending.
09/02/08
This was a great story. I felt that the characters were real people, and I could visualize what was going on. One pointer would be to avoid switching between points of view, especially in such a short piece like this. I found it a little disorienting.
09/03/08
LoL--you've got to watch that lunch meat! A fun read with a good ending. :)