The Official Writing Challenge
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A truly beautiful story; very well crafted :)
This story brought a little catch in my throat. You touched my emotions.
08/29/08
Love your first paragraph, and this is a warm and engaging story.

At times the dialogue seemed a bit stilted, not quite realistic.

Nice portrayal of a lovely relationship across generations.
Lovely story, very well-written.:)
09/03/08
Such a sweet story--with a lesson tucked in for us, too. Enjoyable!
WOOOWWWW! Amazing! I felt as though I was Betty with my gran. Your word pictures are like wrapping in a quilt and sitting next to a roaring fire with hot cocoa.
Oh yeah, I forgot something. The part where Gran says "No one but me and you, and most importantly the Lord," is so true in all of life. Others may not see, but the Lord does-whether it be pleasing to Him or not.