The Official Writing Challenge
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Most excellent! :D
Oh, I loved this!! What a great allegory.
Cute story...good representation of Matthew 7:15.
08/22/08
Awesome allegory, and it would make a great picture book for children. Very well done.
08/22/08
What a great story. I could hear myself reading this to a class of children. I hope there is more to come. Good job!
Love this allegory. :) Perfect picture of the sinner coming before God. Thank you for this enjoyable read. :)
08/25/08
I loved this! I could see pictures as I read. Wonderful!
10/03/08
Glad you entered this in "Friday Fiction." A very creative allegory.
10/06/08
I loved this this time around too, Sherri! Good job and congrats on placing with it!!
10/24/08
Sherri, I'm planning to feature this delightful allegory in the Front Page Showcase for the week of November 3. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page, and congratulations!
I loved this beautiful written story, and the message within. I agree, this would make a wonderful children's book. And parents could talk to them about it's meaning. Great job!
11/03/08
Loved this, very, very creative. The message is wonderful. Thank you.
11/03/08
Incredible allegory! Liked it much!
Yes, a great fable. Well told
11/05/08
I like your name choice "Baleful". :) Congrats on being the Homepage Author this week!