The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/08
You really nailed Martha's conflicts, which are very real--thanks for portraying a good Christian woman as flawed, and constantly in need of Divine help.

I was confused by April, Livy, and Dawson, and if they lived near or far, and...well several aspects of the family dynamics just puzzled me. A bit of clarification might be in order if you re-visit this.

Martha reminded me a bit of myself, so I really related to this.
08/25/08
This is something so many of us--yes, me included!-- grapple with. A good message packed in here.
Great characterization and explicit details. Very nice. :)