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08/21/08
Until I read this, I never actually made the connection between the two deceits! You brought out the irony of this very well.
08/22/08
Great job of tieing the two deceptions together.

I'd have liked a bit more than dialogue to put me inside this story--some bits and pieces of ancient Biblical life, perhaps.

I've often wondered how he felt after he learned Laban's ulterior motives!
08/25/08
Jacob's life was full of contention. These two events are very connected!
Very good story telling of Biblical history. :)