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Until I read this, I never actually made the connection between the two deceits! You brought out the irony of this very well.
Great job of tieing the two deceptions together.

I'd have liked a bit more than dialogue to put me inside this story--some bits and pieces of ancient Biblical life, perhaps.

I've often wondered how he felt after he learned Laban's ulterior motives!
Jacob's life was full of contention. These two events are very connected!
Very good story telling of Biblical history. :)