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This is a great piece about an all too common problem. I loved the way you took the topic, and made it your own. Very unique and culturally rich.
I had to go on-line & find a picture of the Charade! Great story telling. I was suspicious of those people from the beginning.
08/22/08
Well done--I knew something was up, but I wasn't sure what it was. Good job building tension.

I'd have liked to know these two people better, maybe through more dialogue, and more "showing" than "telling".

Loved the ending!
08/25/08
I'm embarrassed to admit to being in the dark--but I know it's me. LoL I'll have to do some research to understand the significance, but I DID enjoy the story.
Unique slant on the topic. I had never heard of a car named the Charade. Thanks for new info. :)