The Official Writing Challenge
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Amazing what "two words" can do! Nicely told story.
08/22/08
Cute story, and I like the narrator's voice.

I'd have liked less introductory material, and more about the change of heart of the relatives.

Nice title, too.

What a nice story of familial reconciliation. So glad the "game" was able to reach them. :)
08/26/08
The voice you used for this piece is great and I also like how the title fits it.