The Official Writing Challenge
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This made me smile. Very original :)
08/21/08
I like the last line, very telling. Good Job, totally different take on the topic.
Haha! I am still laughing, this was wonderful!
Got me laughing too! Absolutely loved it.
08/22/08
Extremely cute, very creative.
Oh, this is so sad. :( Give Emily back her mirror - er-r, I mean "friend". :) Really cute slant on the topic.
08/24/08
Sometimes we,too,need our "mirrors" taken away when we become too focused on ourselves. Loved your allegory.
08/26/08
A delightful read--for sure! I loved the voice! Well done!
08/27/08
Very clever. I really liked the voice of Emily. I would have liked to read more of her experiences with her mirror friend. Nice job with the topic.
This is adorable, entertaining, and right on topic. Loved it!
08/27/08
A very interesting and entertaining read from the viewpoint of a lonely bird. I like your story of Emily and Pear. It puts a smile on my face.