The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/08
Some very good thoughts and truths here! To make it easier on your readers, add an extra space (empty line) between paragraphs. It adds eye-appeal, as well as making it easier to follow along. The last half of this is thought provoking, leaving us something to chew on. Good!
08/16/08
You've done a really good job here. There are some thoughts that hadn't occurred to me in using this week's challenge. I especially liked the thought in the last line of God being "it." Good job.