The Official Writing Challenge
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A story unfortunately needing to be told. And it was told very well. I'm glad the MC picked up her whistle & blew.
08/15/08
It's sad that this happens, but I know it does. It's never pretty. This is yet another example of how the truth always comes out.
Your story-telling was very good here, good descriptions with believable details. What a moral struggle for your MC. Nice job. :)
08/20/08
It's happening too often and it grieves the Holy Spirit. We are all accountable. Well spoken.
Congratulations on your win! This is a sad but well written story.