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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Hide and Seek (08/07/08)

TITLE: The Seeker
By Michelle Earl
08/12/08


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We play in the waters of our life
Life riddled with waters dark and clear
Clear is with God and dark is away
Away hiding from God

God seeks us, pursues us, but we slip away
Away to the next hiding place
Place of darkness, but he sees us
Us, his children

“Children…” He calls, “Time to come home.”
“Home into the clear water.”
Water refreshing, he wants to bathe us
Us who are hiding from and seeking Him

Him who cleanses our wounds shallow or deep
Deep as the deep dark water
Water that we think hides us from Him
Him, the Seeker


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Joy Faire Stewart08/14/08
I enjoyed the poem, especially "Him who cleaneses our wounds shallow or deep." Good job!
Marlene Austin08/15/08
Good message. Nice form having the last word always begin the next line. :)
Patty Wysong08/18/08
Very nice meaning and use of words and repetition.
gayle jackson08/19/08
So much in so few words, it was beautiful and a pleasure to read.


   
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