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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Hide and Seek (08/07/08)

TITLE: Hide-And-Seek (ii)
By Karen Fahel
08/12/08


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While watching children at their play
They run around this sun filled day
They scatter out and all about
As they play Hide and Seek

Under blue and sunny skies
One child covers up her eyes
She counts out loud and is so proud
That she would never peek

She searches all around the yard
It really isn't very hard
To try to spy each little spry
And happy playmate near

She spots one then and she cries out
In a happy, cheerful shout
"Peek-a-boo! I see you!"
Her voice is loud and clear

I watch them and I think that I
Am sometimes hiding right nearby
From God for fear that I am here
But feeling very low

I feel forlorn and all alone
A sadness I have seldom known
I wonder why it is that I
Think God just does not know

But Father God in his great Way
Will see me and I feel him say
"Peek-a-boo! I see you!
I love you as you are!"


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Marlene Austin08/14/08
Why is it we all try to play "hide and seek" with God, when He's always right there. :) Nice poetic form.
Patty Wysong08/18/08
This has a nice rythm and feel to it, with a good reminder for us.
Lucile McKenzie08/20/08
A good reminder and a charming poem. Well done!