The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/08
Unusual poetic form. You fooled me with the paragraphing, but the rhythm and rhyme was obvious. Nice examples to the message. :)
08/15/08
Neat!
08/18/08
The rythm and rhyme completely engaged me--it was hidden, but found. Well done!