The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/08
This is delightful, and very instructive. I love how the relationship develops between the father and the listening child.
Loved this story. Just one question, what is a PP&J? Could it be perfect peace & joy?
Nice slant to the topic. IMHO, I would think giving the daughter a name would have made the conversations a little warmer and more natural. Glad your MC was able to reach her goal. :)
08/19/08
Loved it, caused wet eye. I know about PB&J (just a little mistake) and my favorite sandwich and Daddys make good ones don't they.
08/19/08
A charming story with a very good lesson tucked in there for all of us.