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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Hide and Seek (08/07/08)

TITLE: Sought the Hidden
By gayle jackson
08/09/08


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Hide me in your tent
Seek what I shall find
Hidden words so positive
Sought they are so kind

Hide me in your love
Seek forever your face
Hidden in the world around
Sought, I now embrace

Hide me with thy peace
Seek where is my heart?
Hidden but not lost
Sought, was it apart?

Hide the pain within
Seek a place to rest
Hidden in Your arms
Sought the one thatís best

Hide yourself in Him
Seek the truth to speak
Hidden strength He gives
Sought power to the weak

Hide thy face not from me
Seek and I shall find
Hidden in your blessings
Sought for all man kind

Hide the story on this page
Seek another way
Hidden in the words I write
Sought to find the sway

Hide those sins and sorrows
Seek forgiveness then
Hidden in His tent,
Sought the love within

Lose the truth
Find it there
Lost in Gods love
Found in His care.


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Teresa Hollums08/16/08
I liked your writing. The thoughts written were really quite deep.
Marlene Austin08/17/08
Really enjoyed the meter in the first five stanzas. Creative work beginning each of the four sentences with the repetitive word pattern. Nice job. :)
Patty Wysong08/19/08
Truth wrapped in simplicity. Very nice.