The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/08
There is much emotion that you've written in this piece. There are similarities in my own life. If this is a true piece: I'm so glad you found God because he is the rock that carries us through many difficulties. Good job.
08/15/08
A few grammatical mistakes here - Molly and I (not me) were ....

Yes, life becomes difficult at some stage and it's difficult to cope, but "Train up a young child ....And when s/he is old ...." It's really great to tell these stories. I'd actually like to hear more about how you came back. It's a wonderful process.
08/17/08
Lots of clear detail in this writing. Would like to see the rest of the story one of these days - i.e. did MC return to mom and sis?, how did mom and sis react to MC's decision?, etc. :)
08/19/08
Life has a way of taking twists and turns--I like the hope you held out at that end. That's what it is all about: Jesus and life in Him. You did good pointing us to Him.