The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/08
Interesting how you were able to weave so many incidents in the Bible in this piece. Good job.
08/14/08
Its pretty interesting that they (and we) continually try to hide, but God always finds us!
08/15/08
For some reason, I "heard" this poem in the rap style! And enjoyed it!
08/15/08
Yes, I agree it's a great little rap number with a lesson in there as well. Good writing.
08/17/08
Nice poem - good pattern, rhythm, flow, message carried clearly. In music terms, I felt this in a 2-count pattern (emphasis on the 1st beat). Nice slant on the topic. Good job. :)
08/18/08
I LOVED this catchy little rap song. Made me want to get up and get my groove on jammin' to the tale of Jonah. Very entertaining! I'm rooting for this one to place, because it's just so much fun.
08/19/08
Cute but be careful, run, run, run, but you sure can't hide...ball of confusion. God has often used Jonah's story to get to me.