The Official Writing Challenge
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Your entry speaks the truth about gaps and missing links and gives good suggestions for "bridging" them.
Your writing would be easier to follow with a space between the paragraphs.
This is a thought-provoking article with some good insights about "bridging" difficult situations. A few suggestions: as one other commentator said, space between paragraphs. Also, read through your manuscript, as there were a few misspellings--"crossroads" is one word, should be "fair" not fare, and "presence" not presents. These are things the spell-check won't pick up on. Overalll, however, this is a good article, with an interesting take on the prompt.
ATTENTION: So sorry for the errors; I know better! Thanks.