The Official Writing Challenge
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Great imagery and a truly great poem of a favourite beach pastime - playing with a beach ball!!
This is delightful! It reminds me of Robert Louis Stevenson's "The Swing" as it brings to life so many happy memories! You take your readers right along with the bouncing ball and they feel such joy! Well done!
07/13/05
That was lovely, and so fun and bouncy reading through it. Great writing involved. God bless, littlelight
What fun! I'm still bouncing! I can imagine reading this to my grandchild one day! (When I get one! HAha!)
Wonderful and perfect rhythm! Blessings, Amy
07/15/05
Very cute! a fun read
This is so light and playful! Thank you for making me want to dance to the cadence of the rhyme. :-)
07/17/05
This is cute. I didn't read the title first so was trying to figure out what the poem was about as I read. Made it more of a game. Too fun! And yes, I guessed beach ball... it was either that or a pelican with gas. rofl! ;-)