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This is a novel take on the topic "bridge"- I found I had actually forgotten the topic; It flows well and offers a convincing insight into the search for a loved one- albeit in the wrong place as your article states.
Your story deals well with the temptation to use the occult to contact a loved one. I was glad for the gentle advice of the pastor and how he led the MC gently in the right way without judging her. The hope of the Christian was a wonderful message with which to end the story.
Very unique writing on the topic and the ending is perfect. Wonderful message.