The Official Writing Challenge
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"Not crossing over a bridge, but clambering over a cross"
Now that's a wonderful line!
Your descriptions of Oregon are beautiful and your message precious.
Beautiful, that!
By use of short, sometimes unfinished, sometimes dsconnected sentences, you've successfully infised a dream-like quality into this piece. GOod work.
I wonder if it might have been more focussed if it had started with the 2nd sentence of paragraph 5?