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In your story of repentance and forgiveness, you clearly showed the love of God.
Very well done, The transition from the "ravine" to the room was smooth. Good story!
This is a good testimony of God's love for us and how He bridges the gap in our lives and sets us free from all the memories Satan shames us with. Well done.
Wonderful devotional written with clarity. A perfect ending paragraph, too.
08/12/08
This was very clearly written, easy to follow, and your message was great! Well done.
This would be a great devotional piece for teens. Well written. I really appreciate you sharing this.
Lots of action written clearly. Glad your MC came to this decision. :)