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07/11/05
I liked the scripture at the beginning of your story as the story follows. It would indeed be awesome if we would walk by that same faith as the scripture portrayed--there would be no war, no more. God bless, littlelight
07/14/05
A very well written piece on a touchy subject. We'd all love peace, but scripture does say there will be wars and rumors of war -it's something we can't avoid until Jesus comes back.
We serve God because of the freedom in Christ that is ours. Translating that into an earthly dimension is indeed a challenging task, and difficult to reconcile. Thank you for choosing to address such a topic!
07/17/05
I may be dense today but I think I'm missing the main thrust of this piece. We serve an eternal God whose priority is to reach every soul. I got that part. But how our troops and the beach tie in i slost to me today. Sorry! That said, the author is quite articulate and obviously has a good grasp of language and structure.