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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Bridge (07/31/08)

TITLE: Divine Passage
By Julie Pisacane
08/01/08


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Divine Passage

Walking along on this beautiful day
Scents fill the air from Earth’s bouquet
Connecting me to the wonders of life
Forgetting all worries and senseless strife.


While viewing soft clouds of pinks and blue
My journey shows me something new.
Angels nearby point the way
To the bridges of blessings
Where they sing and play.


Over the bridges, rays of light appear
As ladders of love to a sky so clear.
I imagine climbing up with ease
Reaching the top and finding
Gold keys.


The angels then help me to understand
By placing the keys within my hand.
Slowly I stroll to a sparkling gate
Where doves fly round this
Blessed estate.


A pathway of promise moves my feet...
My journey is nowalmost complete.
In the distance a bell does chime
Announcing the final end of time
Ushering in perpetual days
Filled with eternal
Peace and praise.









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Verna Cole Mitchell 08/07/08
Your poem espresses well a future of hope with the Lord. I liked the creative idea of "bridges of blessing" where the angels play.
Valerie Routhieaux08/07/08
Poems aren't the easiest to write, and you did an excellent job with this one. The meter was good all the way through. Your expression of the bridge where angels play was delightful. Well written.
Randy Foncree08/07/08
Very lovely poem. Good writing. God bless and thanks for sharing it...Randy Gene
Marlene Austin08/10/08
You've painted a beautiful picture with your words. :)
Debbie Harris08/11/08
Beautifully written. Enjoyed
this. Thanks for writing.:)
Alyssa Krauss08/12/08
Beautiful poem. I enjoyed it very much!