The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed reading about the girls' memories of the bridge. You connected the ideas very well,using "bridge" to the past and future.
Very well written. The story grabs you from the beginning, and flows well to the end.
Memories are so precious and I liked how this story showed both the sad and the glad... tying the girls hearts to each other in a strong friendship. Well done.
Your words clearly describe the emotional relationship of these two friends. Nice job. :)
08/11/08
A good story, lots of good bridges between memories, the past and the future.
08/13/08
I too liked the Title and the ending... end everything in between... very sweet story, even with the sad history of the bridge. You balanced it out nicely with good memories and a hopeful future.
08/14/08
Lovely piece. Well done!