The Official Writing Challenge
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07/11/05
"Perfection!" You captured a special moment along with my heart. Thank you for writing this and God Bless you, you talented person!
07/11/05
Wonderful!
It ryhmes, but the rhythm is a little "off" in some parts. Beautiful images though! Thanks for sharing!
Blessings, Amy
This is beautiful! I can feel it all - the sand, the ocean, the warmth, the peace. Your words take the reader right to the beach and 'walk' them through the sand! Lovely!
07/14/05
A nice poem -enjoyed it very much.
07/14/05
Very good poetry. Enjoyed reading it.
God bless, littlelight
I admire this entry since poetry is not my preferred genre! It is a very nice piece, very gentle and reassuring. Good job!
07/16/05
Very nice. (A good poem to read AT the beach). :0) Well done.
07/17/05
loved it. The second stanza made me stumble a bit. But the rest was near perfection. Thanks!
07/18/05
I agree with the comments about rhythm but I really loved the thoughts you expressed in this poem. From one 3rd place to another, WELL DONE!