The Official Writing Challenge
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07/14/05
The little big story.
Nicely done. God bless, littlelight
07/14/05
From one Buckeye to another -if you're going to see the ocean for the first time -what better place to go! Enjoyed going on the trip with you :)
I liked this line: "I saw myself silent and small before such expansiveness." Your story helped me remember how God continues to get bigger and bigger in my own life experience.
A very good read, however I would have combined the last two sentences to minimalize the use of "I had to go to Australia". Otherwise a great read with a great depth. Thank you.
07/17/05
Writing style is very polished. So, why sop short? Skill like your should be expanded! Don't hold out on us! ;-)
Very well written, I am so glad you were blessed when you came to my country, Australia. God recently stretched my horizens when I left my country to see discover the beauty of other countries around the world.