The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved this phrase: "I embraced my emotion intimately; we courted and danced for what seemed like an eternity." What a great picture.
08/01/08
"The morbid scene displayed on my kitchen floor escorted my mind to the events at Calvary". You certainly dohave some wonderful turns of phrase here.
It's so hard to forgive until you can see past the hurt. You covered the emotional conflicts of the MC in realistic detail. Good job. :)
08/04/08
Ouch...I know how easy it is to give in to anger and resentment, and then live in them, rotting away inside as you do so. Very well portrayed--as another comment said, you have quite the knack for turning a phrase!
This is a great reminder to us all of the importance of forgiveness and how we were all given what we need to forgive. Well done.