The Official Writing Challenge
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Many loving sentiments expressed in these verses. Loved the message of the repetitive (title) line. :)
The words have a peacefulness like a prayer. Very enjoyable.
08/04/08
This was very lovely. It did seem like a song :) I did see several mistakes that could easily be corrected with a little more proofreading. Good job! Keep writing!