The Official Writing Challenge
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Reminded me of my grandma many years ago who wrote to me to tell me how God helped her find something she'd misplaced! Nicely done.
Ah, yes, so many of us have been there and done that. I almost expected her to find the tickets in the refrigerator--I can see me doing that! Good job!
Your detailed thoughts really brought the MC to life. You clearly painted the pain in her realization of the problem. Nice job. :)
This is my favorite kind of writing. It lets me see someone (who has the same life issues that I do!) as he or she deals with daily life, relying on God to make it through. Good job. It flowed well. One thing from the Grammaer Nerd: lose has only one o. Loose is what I wish my clothes were again! Thanks for a great read. D